Friday 14 November 2014

Pitch Feedback

The feedback recieved from my class mates and teacher were very negative. Many of them were not clear on the narrative which is due to me not completing my storyboard, which is the main reason why I think they did not fully understand the video's narrative. Also some of my class mates suggested that I should change the artist name as they did not like the artists last name. By having this feedback it has been useful as I have seen that I have to make some changes to my artist. I will also re-do my pitch as I would have made changes to the presentation. These are the feedback sheets from Mrs Raji and the class.



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